Thank you so much for your detailed review! I love detailed reviews. I agree with you completely about Rosalie - to me she's actually the most interesting of the Cullen girls and I plan to do some more writing about her once Jazz gives me a break. ;) I think there's a lot there, but that most people kind of ignore her because they just write her off as a snotty blonde girl - but she's a lot more than that. I want to bring that out eventually.
Edward has always come across to me as annoyingly self-righteous. I hope I don't bring him across too much that way - I did try to keep my distaste for his character in check. But it would be difficult for him to remember exactly what he's supposed to know, and what he just knows because of his ability - I agree!
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Date: 25 March 2009 04:13 pm (UTC)Edward has always come across to me as annoyingly self-righteous. I hope I don't bring him across too much that way - I did try to keep my distaste for his character in check. But it would be difficult for him to remember exactly what he's supposed to know, and what he just knows because of his ability - I agree!
Thank you so much for the comments!